I thought this essay was somewhat challenging, I felt like I did not have much to say about the article. Also, it was difficult for me to make it four pages. However, I think it was a good experience because it made me think about what I believe about anti-male bias and it made me aware of this issue in the English language.
I feel I did best on the body paragraphs in my essay because I gave different example throughout it to support my beliefs about August's article.
I wish I could have spent more time on making it a little longer and making it feel more structured. I do not have that much experience with summary/strong response essays therefore I felt that my paper was just random thoughts thrown together.
The hardest part was coming up with multiple points that went against the grain and with the grain of August's essay. It would be easy if I just needed a couple but once again I did not feel like there was a lot to say without being repetitive.
I do feel like I put forth the expected effort, I tried to make the essay flow and complete the requirements. In addition, I tried to make my essay grammatically correct.
I feel my essay deserves a "B" because it is not completely four pages and I do not know if it us structured as well as it should be. But, I do feel it is pretty well written.
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